班号：030 序号：02 姓名：刘伟桐 Topic: reasons why I dislike shopping in the mall near my school Thesis: The expensive goods, bad environment and people who makes my shopping experience uncomfortable prevent me from shopping in the mall near my school. Topic sentence 1: It costs me more to buy something there. Detail 1: A large amount of goods are common but they are in a special price. Detail 2: Some shoppers will cheat customers. Topic sentence 2: The shopping environment is terrible. Detail 1:I have to protect my money and cellphone from being stolen. Detail 2:The ground is dirty so the virus will multiply rapidly. Topic sentence 3: Most importantly, many people may make my shopping experience uncomfortable. Detail 1: They will argue with each other for a little thing. Detail 2: There are many boys with girlfriend nearby. Detail 3: Some rude people often rush in and out of the crowding shop so they frequently touch me but never realize it, which I hate extremely。 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/7055db56c281e53a5802ff55.html