2019年云南省昆明市中考英语满分作文 某英文网站正在面向全国中学生开展以"感恩父母"为主题的征文活动，请你用英文以" On my parent's birthday"为题目写一篇记叙文投稿，内容为某次你为妈妈或爸爸庆祝生日的经历． 要求：1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2．文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 3．书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分． On my parent's birthday ___________． 【分析】高分句型一： Last Saturday we had a birthday party for my mother at home． 上周六我们在家为我母亲举办了一个生日聚会．have a birthday party for sb为某人举办了一个生日聚会 高分句型二： I asked my mother to blow out the candles and make a wish． 我让妈妈吹灭蜡烛许个愿．ask sb to do sth叫某人做某事，blow out the candles吹灭蜡烛 ，make a wish许愿 【解答】 On my parent's birthday Last Saturday we had a birthday party for my mother at home． 【高分句型一（开篇点题：时间地点人物事件）Some of my friends ，my uncle and aunt came to the party． Everyone bought her a birthday present．（买生日礼物）My father made a big birthday cake and cooked some delicious food． （做蛋糕，烹饪美食）My friends helped to put the candles on the big cake． We all sat around the table．Then we began the party． I asked my mother to blow out the candles and make a wish． 【高分句型二】After that， we sang the birthday song together．（吹蜡烛，许愿，唱生日歌） In the afternoon we watched an interesting movie with my mother．（陪妈妈看电影） Everyone had a good time that day． （感受） 【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题． 2019年云南省中考英语满分作文 A Weekend to Remember 提示：请以" A Weekend to Remember"为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一个令你难忘的周末以及你的感悟． 要求：1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 3．请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效． _________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】 We started fishing as soon as we arrived at a clear lake．我们一到达一个清澈的湖就开始钓鱼． as soon as一…就… 【高分句型二】 I'll remember this weekend forever because I have learnt that being patient is so important to me．我会永远记住这个周末因为我学到了耐心，对我来说是如此的重要． because引导原因状语从句． 【解答】A Weekend to Remember It was a bright and sunny weekend．（天气） I went fishing with my father．We started fishing as soon as we arrived at a clear lake．【高分句型一】（地点） Half an hour passed but we got no fish． I became impatient and wanted to give up．"Just wait patiently， son． Nothing in the world is easy to get． "My father enuraged me．I sat patiently to fish with my father． Finally， I got a beautiful big fish． A sense of success and happiness came to me．（发生的事情） I'll remember this weekend forever because I have learnt that being patient is so 本文来源：https://www.wddqw.com/doc/6617b8ca2a160b4e767f5acfa1c7aa00b52a9d81.html